Hitting the Target

Here’s my poem for your perusal,
Though I’ll not grand first refusal.
It’s your privilege to reject it,
But I’ll not let you correct it.

Words transmitted to the page
I have no way to judge or gauge
If others deem a worthwhile read;
Despite that fact, I must proceed.

My target audience, you see,
Consists of no one else but me.
I love when friends or strangers read it;
It feels great, but I don’t need it.

Some would claim such self-expression’s
Nothing more than pure obsession.
Though there’s truth within that statement,
Don’t expect a poem abatement!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Grand? :) Need I say more. :)))))))) Peace. :)
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:28 AM
- Your poem comes from your heart, always Ilene :) - Always a pleasure to read your poems! - Thank you for the year 2014 - looking forward to a new year with my friends here at "soup" - Happy new year dear friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Love the sentiment here Ilene I write for me - am delighted if other's like and read it that is the most important thing:-) hugs jan xxx
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