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Hitting the Target

Here’s my poem for your perusal, Though I’ll not grand first refusal. It’s your privilege to reject it, But I’ll not let you correct it. Words transmitted to the page I have no way to judge or gauge If others deem a worthwhile read; Despite that fact, I must proceed. My target audience, you see, Consists of no one else but me. I love when friends or strangers read it; It feels great, but I don’t need it. Some would claim such self-expression’s Nothing more than pure obsession. Though there’s truth within that statement, Don’t expect a poem abatement!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/30/2014 10:31:00 PM
Grand? :) Need I say more. :)))))))) Peace. :)
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Date: 12/29/2014 4:28:00 AM
- Your poem comes from your heart, always Ilene :) - Always a pleasure to read your poems! - Thank you for the year 2014 - looking forward to a new year with my friends here at "soup" - Happy new year dear friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2014 6:12:00 PM
Love the sentiment here Ilene I write for me - am delighted if other's like and read it that is the most important thing:-) hugs jan xxx
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