Hitting No More

Hitting no more
As the phone ring my heart sings
i pick up the line ,i feel it will be forever so fine

i put my ear to the phone a voice says leave me alone.leave me alone
our love is dead

you always said you would stand by My side
as i pick up the gun ,to have a little fun the gun falls hitting the floor

shots ring out in the dead of night

for i told you i never wanted to fight.
 

                                                    5th october 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:31 PM
no shots, no shots!! they make a big mess every where!! Are you ok??
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