Hitlers Hell

no end to this neverending sentence...just a sour note and a few mad quotes from the afterlife
afterlife? more like ants in the afterbirth...once a mighty warrior now a worm...i slither and i squirm...
no fire and no heat just chained to this seat...forced to view the victims of violence from this man of misery
with eyes and ears open...not even a blink...with every scarred soul the lower i sink
the movie begins and the theater is dark...and i'm not alone...i can hear other dead dogs bark
these innocent faces turn insane just in seconds...i can feel their disease...turning blessings to curses
a sad symphony and a choir of chaos keep spewing their venomous verses
i once was the greatest but now i'm the worst
i just can't breaK FREE from these shackles and chains...i hear the word NEVER into eternity
the echoes of screams they just come back from the screen
now the skeletal masses are laughing at me
i ask for forgiveness 1000 times a day but my tormentors just laugh..."NOT A CHANCE"
graves of ghosts empty and they all come to me to thank me in person for just being me
no uniformed ugliness just brutality beasts...they all take their turn from the 
a to the z
i cry out to God and he says, "IT'S TOO LATE"
i talk to the devil and he says, "you'll be free any day"
vengeance was mine now i'm getting slain...for all of my sins and my murderous ways
for attrocities all...from the small to the large...i turned good men to monsters and massacred love
i turned peaceful neighborhoods into ghetto battlefields
i broke apart happy families as they cried,moaned,and squealed 
more than six million got sent to their makers with lead sleeping pills
i lived the devils deal...now repaid with revenge...i'm sad,seedy and sour...still no suicide syringe
like blasphemy on a binge i tore hideous holes in the fabric of time
yes to my children of darkness i made the demonic seem divine...i even claimed to turn water into wine
now truth and terror has me thirsty for some kind of a release
from this concentration camp i NEVER can leave
please just one tear from heaven can put me at ease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/30/2011 4:40:00 AM
Masterfully penned, Anthony. It would have been a living nightmare for those people. Condemned, then cruelly killed for hitler's own hellish greed and insecurities. A powerfully intense write, Anthony. God's blessings to you and yours! Mikki
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:06:00 AM
Hi anthony: Quite a powerful poem. When I was stationed at Germany, I visited quite a few places that reminded me of what you mentioned in this poem. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
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Date: 11/13/2010 1:44:00 AM
i could never imaging what goes trough your mine.. Deep thoughts i suppose,, what a poem,, This is amazing, i bet many prisoners felt the pain you touch base with here,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/11/2010 12:25:00 AM
If anyone deserves to suffer for eternity as you describe, it is Hitler. I believe in a forgiving God, but Hitler was the devil incarnate, torturing so many innocent people. Very compelling thoughts, Anthony. Let him suffer for what he did. Blessings to you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:32:00 PM
I agree with Sara on this one,nobody should ever forget what happened.Good write,thanks for your comments on mine.
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Date: 11/10/2010 7:09:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive about that happening..People need to never forget so maybe this will never happen to any people again..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I appreciate your review of my work..Sara
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