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I Can See You And me Enjoying The life. You Can see You and Me As man and wife. Your dad said To me That Marriage Ain't just fun. You have Girl, I have Gun! PS Syllable Counter 1 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 3 4 3 2 1 2 3 2 1 2 1 13 June 2021 Contest: Waltz Wave Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 2:47:00 PM

Terry, this made me laugh! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Terry Flood
Date: 6/27/2021 11:43:00 AM

And thank you for my placement. I often approach contests at a bit of a tangent, often to be rewarded with N/A... which merely makes a placement all the more rewarding. Thanks again, Kim. Terry

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2021 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. A dad's gun will keep a boy in line. Enjoy your win with blessings..................

Terry Flood
Date: 6/26/2021 2:26:00 PM

Thankyou Paula. So glad you enjoyed. Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 5:44:00 PM

back with my congrats. This one was especially fun and enjoyable to read.

Terry Flood
Date: 6/25/2021 4:11:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, pleased that you enjoyed. Most of what I write nods toward ‘tongue in cheek’ so I get a lot of N/A. As such, it’s nice to find myself on the podium sometimes. Terry

Marilene Evans

Date: 6/24/2021 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations! Yes, I did laugh. There were so many marriages that came about cause the Dads showed their guns to the guys who knocked out their girls... I heard when I was growing up... Cute poem....

Terry Flood
Date: 6/24/2021 4:27:00 PM

You HEARD huh? Hmmm... thanks Marilene. Terry