Hit Or Miss

I imagine a world better than this
Only to realize it’s hit or miss
Some days you hit the ball out of the park
While other days it’s hard to see where to start...

Seeing is believing and belief it will grow
All that I need shall be all that I know
Sometimes things aren’t as they appear
The perspective changes as you grow near.

Hearing without listening  nothing is heard
To think you just know is quite absurd
Many things change from one day to the other
As your perspective changes you will discover.

 I walk out today with no destination in mind
I open my eyes and it’s a treasure I find
I get on board so I don’t get left behind
Vision returns where once I was blind.

I need to work more on developing faith
Make it a home a place that is safe
Sometimes I’m stubborn and try to save face
This is the time I must learn grace.

Te sun sets and the day is done
The horizon greets the vanishing sun
I hope to do better than the day before
 Only reason is because I want this more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/29/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations Mark on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Carol hope all is well with you:) Life has been a trip klately pending publishing contract,this. on another site I wasrated the number two poet and I'm climb tha charts eveywhere:) It all because of people like you though because of you I am....Mark
Date: 8/15/2011 11:52:00 PM
all that we need shall be... wisdom here, Mark. Thanks.
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Date: 8/18/2011 9:36:00 PM
Thanks but I don't know how wise I am :) It's really just the way i see things I have the Mark dictionary with my own definitions and even a few of my own words. But think of the reverse of this line If you don't know what you need you shall never know. Take carre and thanks for reading:) Mark
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