Fawn Cardiff Poet I do not know?

Hit Me Like This

I never knew love could hit me like this it hit me hard like a ton of bricks i wasn't expecting it 
but it just hit caught me off guard came in real hard turned my world upside down made me 
lost till i was found spun my head round an round made me dizzy with its pound turned my 
heart inside out dug in deep with out a sound gave me courage when i was down lifted me up 
from the ground made me feel id never come back down could this be love that i found it 
tugs on my heart with the invisible string you found i feel its pull when your not around 
together we are bound by loves invisible string you found

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Nadia Shahwan April 18, 2009 at 7:32 AM Unique. Would it be with commas instead of reading it as a letter?..I never knew love could hit me, (1st line)...It hit me hard like a ton of bricks. (2nd line)....I wasn't expecting it (3rd line) ...and so forth. Or...8cylab, 9cylab, then 7cylab. Beautiful words in it.