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Hit and Run

A hit and run A masquerade It's just my lot now to be played. A little daft A bit too large Never one to just take charge. Way too kind And silent too Perfectly convenient for passing through Go ahead Try it out This girl feels pain but she won't shout Hit and run Have some fun Don't look behind you when you're done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/3/2013 10:38:00 PM
You write well Juli, i like the comparison here... just like a person who commits a true hit and run... how they never look back... great write...Linda
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Date: 9/29/2013 5:36:00 PM
Sometimes there is a passing experience that hurts, knocks one down, but it sounds to me you have picked yourself up, and dusted yourself off, and have gained new wisdom at the same time. I like this poem!
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Date: 9/3/2013 8:06:00 AM
Forging forward through the pain. Damn, I feel this. Excellent job!
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Date: 9/2/2013 11:17:00 PM
Very sad poem with inner expressions
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