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a baby rattler a coil of consequences napping on warm stones John G. Lawless 7/8/2020

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Date: 7/8/2020 10:49:00 PM
'a coil of consequences' -- that line stopped me in my tracks! … apropos, too, for a poem about a rattler! FAVE! Superb Haiku, John! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:40:00 PM
Good one! :)
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:16:00 PM
This is cute and has bite! "D
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