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His Words

It was his words I fell in love with first For each rendition I had a thirst His voice so melodic like music it flowed Every note in each sentence seemed to capture my soul How pure and simple his message sent Hours upon hours of listening spent Our lives came together precious moments we did share, I felt so warm and welcomed with his love and in his care Then one day it happened as I guess I knew it would, the long distance came between us and so silently he stood It is hard to keep the love alive when words are all you have, his needs were more than I could give how tragic and how sad I am grateful for the time he gave his loving words my heart will save I loved him then, I love him still I guess somehow I always will...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/5/2011 4:15:00 PM
Was it as Linda guessed, a long distance relationship then? Or was it the same guy the topic of the blue Christmas poem? I enjoyed reading this one, keep up the good work. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:05:00 PM
Very very beautiful. Thank you for this poem
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:57:00 PM
I love them Sharon the rhyme and couplets~SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:20:00 PM
A long distance romance has long shot odds Sharon to survive ..u have penned it so well but luv is to be taken hold of when it comes along..enjoy the ride.. if it lasts ..great.. if not.. what an experience to remember ... great one ..enjoyed my friend with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:20:00 PM
good luck if for John's contest on Jaded Partitions.. luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:42:00 PM
Nice passionate thoughts yu haved penned for the person you loved him
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Date: 12/5/2010 12:05:00 PM
deep write,, feelings engraved in one's heart, enjoyed your write Sharon,..p.d.
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