His Star

He made a fair star
with splashes of vivid tones
gave its goodnight kiss

colorcreationgodnaturereligionhaiku

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Dalia Shahein

January 7, 2016 at 8:46 PM

Welcome dear Anne to the poetry soup with this beautiful piece , I hope ur gonna find the soup as ur second home , hugs / / :) dalia

Anna Li

January 9, 2016 at 4:18 AM

Thank you Dalia, it already is!! :) hugs*

Pandita Sietesantos

November 20, 2015 at 11:53 PM

Hi Anna, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Anna Li

November 21, 2015 at 3:21 AM

Thanks Pandita!

Poet Destroyer A

November 20, 2015 at 3:05 AM

Hi Anna, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anna Li

November 20, 2015 at 6:34 PM

Thank you~ :)

David Meade

November 19, 2015 at 9:24 PM

I see this great imagine of a star shining throughout heavens -- colors and song combine .. . united in a holy kiss! Loved your haiku.

Anna Li

November 20, 2015 at 12:10 AM

Thank you!

Skat A

November 19, 2015 at 5:53 PM

Anna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anna Li

November 20, 2015 at 12:09 AM

Thanks Skat! I hope so too! That would be great! :)

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