His Secret

In tears his body frozen a still
He whispered "A secret for you
I must, if you will"?

His eyes possessed by fire & 
fear
For this...no one must hear!

A vision a Goddess you must 
be?
A blinding aura...
Your sweet scent washes over 
me.

Your eyes of seduction green 
they shine...
My dear angel,
You are not broken, just 
confined!

An explanation for you I'm 
Afraid not...
Tortured has been my soul,
To live without you I fear I 
cannot!   

A gift I thought? Or feared it 
could be,
A demon sent to test and 
Break me!

Lifeless I am - desire a loss
With no care for what this may 
cost.

A shift in their attentions
A love was built to comfort- to 
listen.

Covered in a blanket by a world 
To busy to see...
The forces of nature were sent 
To make this be!

In this restraint "I will not say 
goodnight!"
My dear goddess...
May I kiss you & melt into your 
Light?

The angel's silence had finally
Been broken...
Her aura sang words never
Meant to have been spoken!

I am now yours as you had 
wished
This to be...
"My Dear, Your kiss is 
everywhere &
Only where I want to be set 
free!"

There it was as if her senses 
Could see-in his kiss...
Invisible melodic images burst 
From the trees!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/23/2013 12:07:00 PM
Kerrie , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Kerrie Sursely
Date: 3/25/2013 9:04:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying my poem. This means a lot coming from you. You just made my day!
Date: 1/20/2013 5:42:00 AM
Kerrie, I like your poem very well, you are good. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have much pleasure in sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2013 9:14:00 AM
Thank u very much ;) I started to write again after 15 years so I'm a work in progress!! Thanks again Kerrie
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