His Pacific Blues .....

In his eyes
He drove a little far ...

Away from the few
he knew ....

With no rhyme or hue
On a black canvas he drew ...
His Pacific Blues .....

Darker yet bland
were the shades of blur ...

Strumming his slur ...
fluttering in harmony
Over his bleeding lull

In his eyes
He drove a little too far ...

Away from the few
he knew ....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Wandering Nomad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:26 PM
W N, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:12 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Wandering. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Well written friend.. Keep em comin'...:JP]
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