His Name Is Liberty(Not What You Exspect)

Trys to tell me im bound becuz he cant see,he is the key that sets the shackels free.tells me 
life should be less strain but he is all that takes my pain...away, he is a cool breeze to my 
hot summer day.I want to yell and tell him i need him here forever!!Like a bird needs its 
feathers to fly.He must not say goodbye,unless i shall not be freed.and left here to die.to dry 
up in the sun like a raisen waiting for the end of the day.Left standing as he walks away.And 
those chains they bind me once again like they are here to stay.as soon as he is gone my 
constraint seems to grow.Like love never did flow through these veins.But his touch is 
enough to loose these chains.I KNOW!.Because he was here and i was free,and i wish to be 
where id be with him,and he with me......eternaly.
His name is liberty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Yei, love is energy and energy flows, freedom feels like a threedimentionalized line flowing =D yei I like your style of grammar jojojo no rules C= thanks for sharing yei!!
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June 13, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Smile~Yes, love and companionship can be liberty!! And upon the other hand Rebecca, freedom also offers her liberty!! Thus I find a double edged purpose to this wonderful poem of Yours--Fulfilling within both ways as served!!? Again, "You" prove to be a very gifted writer; with wisdom and passion at Your helm~"Excellent"~"Love & Warmth to You & Yours, John!!:) Bye ~
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