Louis Rams Poet Rhyme

His Love Letter

I thought I’d drop a line to you
To let you know what I’m going through.
I know that we are no longer together
And you may think that it’s better.

But I am in so much pain
Since you left,  I’ve never been the same.
There is a void in my heart
Ever since we’ve been apart.

This void is like the oceans swells
And I feel like I’m going thru hell.
I recall every feature of your face
And no one can ever take your place.

I feel the gentleness of your kiss
It is something I will always miss 
The scent of your body capturing me
Holding my heart, and never letting it free.

Your eyes taking me deep into your soul
A pleasure that I will forever hold.
Recalling those moments of love making pleasure
A memory that I will forever treasure. 

These are the things that I am going thru
And it’s all because of you.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 29, 2011 at 8:35 PM Eloquently pennd louis and breaking up is never easy .. the memories last forever and more... wonderful emotional expressions in your lines luv..

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2011 at 1:19 PM Very expressive and emotive work..Glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like this was someone that you had a very deep love relationship..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2011 at 4:32 PM Just after a breakup it's hard to let go of the memories, Louis. In time, we either find our way back to the one we loved or discover a way to move on. Very heartfelt poem. Best wishes, Carolyn