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His Love Letter

I thought I’d drop a line to you To let you know what I’m going through. I know that we are no longer together And you may think that it’s better. But I am in so much pain Since you left, I’ve never been the same. There is a void in my heart Ever since we’ve been apart. This void is like the oceans swells And I feel like I’m going thru hell. I recall every feature of your face And no one can ever take your place. I feel the gentleness of your kiss It is something I will always miss The scent of your body capturing me Holding my heart, and never letting it free. Your eyes taking me deep into your soul A pleasure that I will forever hold. Recalling those moments of love making pleasure A memory that I will forever treasure. These are the things that I am going thru And it’s all because of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/29/2011 8:35:00 PM
Eloquently pennd louis and breaking up is never easy .. the memories last forever and more... wonderful emotional expressions in your lines luv..
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Date: 3/26/2011 1:19:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like this was someone that you had a very deep love relationship..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2011 4:32:00 PM
Just after a breakup it's hard to let go of the memories, Louis. In time, we either find our way back to the one we loved or discover a way to move on. Very heartfelt poem. Best wishes, Carolyn
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