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His Longest Hour

Gray skies flew over the medows, not a ray of light was found Slowly they moved on, pausing to a nervous heart, for their life was to end Death rode among them, taking lives as there was no tomorrow on that bloody ground They loved eachother, as the anxiety rose, fearing the the unknow, tasting death in the air and in sound They fall one by one, what do they fight for we ask? For liberty, for our freedom, for equal life and human right! To challenge the dark prince himself for faith is greater than fear in any task Yet life is but a spoken word, see yee not the end of all things is ever so near, his love you still figth? Yee see for He built your windows, the curtain was hanged by thee See not clrealy what is happening? Fear dwells with in your heart and soul Figth in my kings name, praise Him for he shall deliver thee from pain for ever worry free! As in all justice, the acts of thy heart matter not for thy mind evil stole They fight for justice, and world order to prevail I tell you this very day, for it is written that the end of all is to pass Hide where ever thee shall fits as His passing shall feel even the smallest of mass He shall not fail Our soldiers fall as the domino effect We shall hold them in our thougths and mind Who am I but a simple poet to write in their memory, so full of regret And I die, as my life is to end this very day, its grows purple and sour Amen, my longest hour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2009 3:31:00 PM
Dear Jeremiah,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "His longest hour" being Featured this week A well deserved feature Excellent Write ALWAYS. ..HG
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:05:00 AM
Jeremiah, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:49:00 AM
congradulations on being featured this week. john h loving iii
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:44:00 AM
Great writing. A beautifully inspiring write from a tender soul. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita~ thank you for all of your kind comments on my writing btw.
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:15:00 AM
Congrats Eduardo on "His Longest Hour" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:59:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:32:00 AM
a beautiful poem, and uplifting, thanks for all your kind comments, congrats on being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:16:00 PM
Hello Jer, very interesting and inspiring poetry. Kuyos on your featured poem. Mine is also featured this weke.Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:03:00 PM
Interesting perspective, giving the reader much to ponder. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:21:00 PM
Such an inspiring poem, and well deserving being among the featured works this week. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:09:00 PM
a great write so full of devotion, thanks for your kind comments on my poem a brand new day, your poes are inspiring to me also, God bless you from diane
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Date: 4/8/2009 2:11:00 PM
mind blowing are your poems. especially this one my poet
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:20:00 PM
Nicely written and full of meaning
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