His Gentleness

He gently creeps into her room
to rest tenderly near her side
 while thoughts of melancholy zoom
 in  of his once vibrant bride
she's been there for him
so many, many years
he sniffles~and tries to hide 
the sorrow and the tears
she has been injured and hurt
but has lost the fight
she will not make it through the night
she will be in paradise by tomorrow's day
he reaches to sniff her best skirt
holds it tight~ it smells of her perfume
he drags over to the vanity to spray
her familiar scent around the room
he cradles her head within his arm
then musters an adoring smile as he whispers in her ear, 
"Time travels fast, and I will see you in a while, my dear"
He provides her warmth by stroking her hair
he wants to capture this image of her there
he wants this moment painted on the wall
so that he can always,always recall
how peaceful she seemed while adrift somewhere.

Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest MC. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Peranteau Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 4:57 PM
What a warm and tender write dear poet...congratulations with your feature this week ! Much love, james
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week McCuen. Love, Carol
Irvin Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 7:49 PM
i was moved! so sad but so sweet to lose someone but to be loved in that way.
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