His Double-Edged Sword

She is wearing a smile on her sexy  lingerie,

Shining like a stars as she step down the stairs.

Humming a soft tone of a lyrics she made.

And thunder came in and break the silence.

She starts chillin' and turn a place to hide in.

But her catastrophe seems like no ending.

The edge of his sword penetrates on her flesh.

She is wounded, blood scatters on the wall.

No one can save her dying soul..---

She screams...aloud but no one could hear.

The trembling voice buried her to dungeon.

Who can take her away from hell..--

Who can annihilate the sword of a beast.

No one..until she rise up and break his neck!




** 6th Place Winner in Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: A Missed Poem**
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A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 1:13 PM
Thanks for the comment on my blog, Lol...didn't think anyone goes reading them blogs. sweet. just like the win right here. Skat
Torres Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 1:27 PM
I always tell my seatmate 'bout poetrysoup and all about us..I even introduce you, linda and some of our poets... And when I opned your photo on your blog..we saw that one with your "big atomic bomb!" ..we turned out like this...HUUUUUWWWWWOOOOOW!!!!! lol!!! you're a goddess!!! ..^__^
Onclaud Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 3:31 PM
atta girl, aiyah.. sweet congrats!..huggs
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 3:51 PM
THANK YOU , nette!!!! big hugs!!!! ^__^
Mehta Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, Aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!!! ...it's always a pleasure to participate in your contest!! ..^__^
Lamoureux Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:45 AM
disturbing and effective.
Torres Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:17 AM
what a strong., daring write filled with piercing lines...ang beautiful nito,aiyah.. SOUP MAIL.. huggs
Torres Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:38 AM
thank you ,Nette.. :) your poems are my inspiration..thanks for the visit! ..^_^
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December 17, 2013 at 10:29 PM
The ending was a great surprise. Awesome poem here! Always, Laura
Torres Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Nice to have you, Laura.. :)) thanks for the visit..I appreciate it much :') ..loveLots!! ^_^
Melugin Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 6:01 PM
She is strong! I love this poem! You express your poetry in a delightful way. original and so creative. You rock poetry! 7 stars, Chuck
Torres Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:14 AM
my dear, Chuck..how can I express the gratitude that I feel..everytime your words appeared on my screen??..hehe..thanks a Lot! :()
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