His Child Standing At, Time's Door

We couldn't see the turmoil past their swirling smoke
Something strange although ? Seeking for a gesture her children
Granted this clarity should not be given; at least, in his physical realm
Ninty-nine blue balloons these answers wavering amid another's storms saddling
Up their unicorns ride captain ride, upon your mystery ship ? Bovine bottles and goat milk
Spilling from their lips hedge hog philosophy drawn from, portentouslies mystical pit: labyrinthos
Doggerel dogma Dodo's delirium tremens delivered aside Dae's podium being definitive's deism hiscere...
Maitre d'hotel feigned her facade espouse, gyrations; marinated peace signs his pork's stillborn ? Love's keyhole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 29, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Hi Jeremy, I don't know why I love everything about this poem... This is a fine poem, with slight alliterated lines. Making this my new favorite poem of the month. I don't know where exactly every line leads, however, I enjoyed the mystery and metaphors. Many of my favorite themes on these few lines.... hugs ~ Linda
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