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Pyramid of Peace Contest, 7/12/2026, Ink Empress

Contest based on promot

Chosen prompt is my first line

His Beauty was a Beast

Kiss me when the sun sleeps,
When the bite grows, and seeps.

Tongue no longer restrained,
As blood from your face, drained.

Our tango, twist of fate;
Wiggle of charm was bait.

Removed your crucifix,
And set up candlesticks.

Was surprised to see dark
In your eyes, like a shark.

Cape stopped you from thinking.
In a coffin, sinking.

Down onto the mattress fell.
Now in your heart, I dwell.

Your scream, beside the point;
Jugular out of joint.

When dusk penetrates, fear
Aims fangs, quick, like a spear.

His beauty was a beast;
Doe-eyed virgin, deceased.
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August 3, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Wow dear Kim, this is beautiful! And so very catchy too the rhythm of your rhyme scheme! This should have been placed higher! Sigh I love your unique wordplay and also the soul hitting manner youv delivered for the orompt especially “ His beauty was a beast; Doe-eyed virgin, deceased.” Brilliant!! I couldnt even guess this was written by you! Thank you for writing Pleasure reading Congratulations on your win Sending you light
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Thank you kindly!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "His Beauty was a Beast" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Gibson Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 7:41 AM
Best wishes, Kim; you stepped into the dark side with this one.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 10:28 AM
I guess I went there. Have to develop the character. Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:55 AM
me thinks you've slipped into the dark side :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:42 PM
LOL! I just watched many vampire episodes ;)
Smith  Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 3:34 AM
Very interesting though maybe disturbing verse.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:31 AM
You can tell I used to watch vampire shows, especially Dark Shadows.
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 2:52 AM
Kim, your poem is so vivid and descriptive. It's interesting how you manage to make your imagery look sad, dark, and funny at the same time. Well said!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:31 AM
Thank you for a lovely comment! Hugs
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Too grisly for me. lol. ~ Weakening Werewolf
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:34 AM
LOL…WW!
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:08 PM
This poem told such an interesting, dark, sad and funny tale, Kim. I absolutely love the imagery! Thank you for sharing. :) Best wishes for the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:05 PM
whoa..it's getting steamy here, kim...much delighted to see you going ' bare '
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:34 AM
LOL…used to watch Dark Shadows. Hugs
Hind Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 7:14 PM
I liked this Kim- intriguing, foreplay, hopeful spooning ~ ? you do erotica well, lol - a poetess who can write most anything,
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Paige. You always make me feel encouraged.
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