Written September 12, 2026 For the Premiere Contest, “The Rebel” Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Line of inquiry: “Neither desire nor aversion Meditation our immersion Conditioned beliefs discarded Hymns we hum are our own version” A child I was, when Nuns taught me in school; so God was with me from an early age. The catechism shaped for me each rule- my soul's foundation at this tender stage, to help unlock a door I would engage. My reading about God was not the key- but seeing what He is- enlightened me. That feeling that He's near in all I do, the balances of nature, my guarantee- internal hymns of love, faith, hope, accrue. I sing the hymn of Love through family, and feel God's care is echoed from each heart. I sing the Hymn of Faith, a tapestry of sunset glow that leads to a fresh start, and sing my Hymn of Hope on new day's chart. Love, Faith, and Hope are His Amazing Grace- my heart and soul, with God there, interface.
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