Hiraeth

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I yearn for that welcoming haven I wish I could revisit once more! Memories sprouted in this house of mirth. This was my... father's home. 'Twas mine just as much! Alas, he left this world and... so did my haven... (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 10/28/2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2020 12:51:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Edward ... but sad - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/29/2020 3:13:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2020 2:04:00 PM

Simply awesome! Into my FAVES.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/28/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the FAV, my friend!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/28/2020 1:11:00 PM

Beautiful verse my friend. Happy birthday , birthdays come and go , but you get better with time ; ) and I mean with your beautiful verses .. hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/28/2020 1:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve:-) I appreciate the birthday wish and kind comments! Remain blessed.