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Hips Sway

reddest rose hips sway full in pink spring breeze - bumble bees swarm Inspired by but not entered in Sexyku Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 3/9/2017 4:16:00 PM
Nice Haiku, Rhonda! Did anyone get stung? ;-)
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Date: 2/24/2017 12:23:00 PM
Nice images of nature in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/23/2017 12:48:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this clever write...based on the birds and definitely the bees!
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Date: 2/21/2017 4:33:00 PM
lovely and very clever, rhonda...
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Date: 2/21/2017 3:31:00 PM
oooh, yes, you really made it about nature at the same time. LOVE this.
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Date: 2/21/2017 2:25:00 PM
what wonderful imagery Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/21/2017 1:40:00 PM
This was beautiful Rhonda. I love the sounds of bees buzzing as I walk up to a rose bush in the spring.
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