Hips Sway

reddest rose hips sway
full in pink spring breeze -
bumble bees swarm



Inspired by but not entered in Sexyku Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O'Leary Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Nice Haiku, Rhonda! Did anyone get stung? ;-)
Anish Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Nice images of nature in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Yvonne Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Good luck in the contest with this clever write...based on the birds and definitely the bees!
Bauer Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 4:33 PM
lovely and very clever, rhonda...
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 3:31 PM
oooh, yes, you really made it about nature at the same time. LOVE this.
Allison Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:25 PM
what wonderful imagery Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM
This was beautiful Rhonda. I love the sounds of bees buzzing as I walk up to a rose bush in the spring.
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