Hip Hop Moves

On the stage, the pre-teen girls
Displayed their hip hop moves,
As sequins sparkled while the dancers
Got into their grooves.

Though just a dress rehearsal,
Make-up gleamed on lips and eyes
And you could spot the older selves
Their bodies did disguise.

Yet even with suggestive thrusts,
Their innocence shone through.
Of grown-up sexuality,
These girls had not a clue.

And that was wonderful to see, 
Especially because
My grandchild was among those dancers
Waiting for applause.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 4:07 PM
don't like so much the ambiguity of too young dancers, but the show worth it, enjoyed your poem
Loving Iii Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Act your age.
M  Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 10:33 AM
How true Ilene they have no clue and how to watch your granddaughter on stage! Special moments! Enjoyed….Debx
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