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Hip Hop Moves

On the stage, the pre-teen girls Displayed their hip hop moves, As sequins sparkled while the dancers Got into their grooves. Though just a dress rehearsal, Make-up gleamed on lips and eyes And you could spot the older selves Their bodies did disguise. Yet even with suggestive thrusts, Their innocence shone through. Of grown-up sexuality, These girls had not a clue. And that was wonderful to see, Especially because My grandchild was among those dancers Waiting for applause.

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Date: 5/16/2025 4:07:00 PM
don't like so much the ambiguity of too young dancers, but the show worth it, enjoyed your poem
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Date: 5/16/2025 11:09:00 AM
Act your age.
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Date: 5/16/2025 10:33:00 AM
How true Ilene they have no clue and how to watch your granddaughter on stage! Special moments! Enjoyed….Debx
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