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Hip Hop

quick talk
timed to the beat
doin’ the “Dougie Dance”
party pumpin' rhythm ‘n rhymes
granny


Caryl Ramsdale
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Cinquain Poetry Form

September 7, 2001

Copyright © Caryl Ramsdale | Year Posted 2011

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September 22, 2011 at 7:11 AM

Conjours up a lovley image :).

September 16, 2011 at 2:00 PM

LOL, what a fun granny - love it : )

September 15, 2011 at 9:29 AM

Interesting work..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one..I suppose that your comment below means that you will be away a few days..I guess that you are preparing to get your work published..Good luck ..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

September 13, 2011 at 12:16 PM

Dear fellow poet: Taking a time out while I organize my collection of poetry forms. Be back soon! CR

September 8, 2011 at 8:11 PM

What a fun poem. Nice use of alliteration for a rhythmic effect. Good luck in the contest. Karen

September 9, 2011 at 10:41 AM

Thanks for the kind comment Karen. CR

September 8, 2011 at 7:53 PM

This is quite the awesome "dance" poem! I really enjoyed the rhythm and flow of your poem a lot! Very good work!! Good luck in nette's contest!!

September 9, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Thanks for stopping by to read and comment Russell. CR

September 8, 2011 at 2:29 PM

This is cute Caryl.. good luck for Nette's contest ;) Wilma

September 9, 2011 at 10:39 AM

This is true lol...Thank you! CR

September 8, 2011 at 8:35 AM

Nice one Caryl. Good luck in the contest. Kim

September 9, 2011 at 10:38 AM

Thank you! CR

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