Notes About The Poem

One of my first Haiku's published by Prolific Press 2015 in Three Line Poetry

Hints of Truth

negative feelings

permeate egregiously

hints of truth remain

11-30-15


August 3, 2018
Senryu Contest By Mick Talbot
First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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Hargrove Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 2:17 PM
Thank you for sharing! Great work of art! Am a fan now! Will read more of your work now!
Roper Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Nicely done, Susan, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:33 AM
Thanks, Eve.
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Susan. The pensive silhouette is perfect.
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:32 AM
Why, thank you very much!
Gaul Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Truth remains Susan. Congrats on your winning ink.
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your top win...well deserved! :)
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Thank you, :)
Pett Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan with your exceptional Senryu. :))
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:30 AM
Thank you Roy.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Congrats on your top win, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:29 AM
Thank you.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Very wise thoughts, Susan! Congrats on your Prolific Press publication and your First Place win in this contest! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:29 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Congrats on another win with this published gem of yours, Susan.
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:28 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Powerful Senryu! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo!
Gentry Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 3:51 PM
hints of truth. That is a cool final line!!
Gentry Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Thanks Andrea! Thanks for reading and commenting.
Leake Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Like the Haiku Susan, You write these really well, enjoyed it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Gentry Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:17 AM
Thank you Kevin! Glad you liked it.
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