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Hindrance

Deceptive favorite Smiles and bites Causing stagnancy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/16/2011 9:16:00 AM
Thought provoking piece. Found myself pondering about all the possible meanings. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 1/29/2011 7:20:00 AM
This one leaves us to guess who is deceptive with a smile that bites. Hindrance caused by someone. See forms for Haiku. love mom
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:11:00 PM
you have me wondering....?
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:24:00 PM
What is this one about, Charles?
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