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Hill Moon For the Owl

Hill moon eclipsed in the rain-filled blue clouds
Dark and light play in the boughs
Old owl plays the sitar
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07/04/2017

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Agnes Krampe

April 7, 2017 at 2:58 PM

Love the images, Probir - you evoke such a rich atmosphere with so few words.

Probir Gupta

April 8, 2017 at 12:45 AM

Some real moments do arrive ... Sometimes words come readily to match ... It happens ... Thank you for your nice expression ... ...

Kim Rodrigues

April 7, 2017 at 8:22 AM

Lovely!

Probir Gupta

April 8, 2017 at 12:47 AM

It is lovely in the mirror too ... Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 7, 2017 at 6:58 AM

- A lovely poem, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

April 8, 2017 at 12:48 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ... Your comments, a joy of mine ...

Darren White

April 7, 2017 at 6:56 AM

You are amazingly good with your kimos. I LOVE that last line....

Probir Gupta

April 8, 2017 at 12:54 AM

Not exactly ... Constance's contest was a trigger ... Earlier too I composed lanterne ... But this time I got a little over enthused with this form and found it very convenient to convey a little deeper things symbolically ... anyway, thank you so much ...

Chris Green

April 7, 2017 at 6:07 AM

Really nicely done Probir.

Probir Gupta

April 8, 2017 at 12:54 AM

Thank you, Chris ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 7, 2017 at 2:24 AM

What a melodious sitar it is my friend Probir! A 7 my friend!

Probir Gupta

April 7, 2017 at 5:03 AM

And incidentally, today is Pandit Ravi Shankar's birthday ... Being celebrated all over the world ... anyway, thank you for enjoying the almost micro poem ...