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Hill Moon For the Owl

Hill moon eclipsed in the rain-filled blue clouds Dark and light play in the boughs Old owl plays the sitar ______________________________________________________ 07/04/2017

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Date: 4/7/2017 2:58:00 PM
Love the images, Probir - you evoke such a rich atmosphere with so few words.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/8/2017 12:45:00 AM
Some real moments do arrive ... Sometimes words come readily to match ... It happens ... Thank you for your nice expression ... ...
Date: 4/7/2017 8:22:00 AM
Lovely!
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Date: 4/8/2017 12:47:00 AM
It is lovely in the mirror too ... Thank you ...
Date: 4/7/2017 6:58:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/8/2017 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ... Your comments, a joy of mine ...
Date: 4/7/2017 6:56:00 AM
You are amazingly good with your kimos. I LOVE that last line....
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Date: 4/8/2017 12:54:00 AM
Not exactly ... Constance's contest was a trigger ... Earlier too I composed lanterne ... But this time I got a little over enthused with this form and found it very convenient to convey a little deeper things symbolically ... anyway, thank you so much ...
Date: 4/7/2017 6:07:00 AM
Really nicely done Probir.
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Date: 4/8/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thank you, Chris ...
Date: 4/7/2017 2:24:00 AM
What a melodious sitar it is my friend Probir! A 7 my friend!
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Date: 4/7/2017 5:03:00 AM
And incidentally, today is Pandit Ravi Shankar's birthday ... Being celebrated all over the world ... anyway, thank you for enjoying the almost micro poem ...
Date: 4/6/2017 10:21:00 PM
this is wonderful, Probir. SEVEN love the imagery and your last line especially.
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Date: 4/6/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea, for liking the little poem ...

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