Hiku: you're my girl

I'm o
          f
              f  my f—e—e—t ~
      when I see your d~~a~~n~~c~~e
you're just so 
                         C
                             U
                                 T
                                     E

I scream l—o—u—d ~
for your e
                  ars to hear
you're my G
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                                L
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Daniels Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:46 AM
So V E R Y expressive, Sir. I trust your girl loved it. X.
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Lol. Thanks Ghairo for this comment.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 12:45 PM
this is cute as the dickens!
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Lol. Thanks Andrea
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