Hiku: true love

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                            l*o*v*e lives h-e-r-e

your thoughts f~~l~~o~~a~~t ~
in my w~a~t~e~r of B
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                                  l*o*v*e   s~a~i~l~s   on
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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 3:30 PM
So sweet and creative. Congrats
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Thanks Sara
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