Hiku: sweet love

your love is  s~~w~~e~~e~~t
your  ~s~m~i~l e\  is the C
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                I need not be told

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           d me that s~w~e~e~t~n~e~s~s
my thanks won't be any L
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        just trust me and see
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Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Muchly appreciated Sara K.
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Thriveni.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Big congrats!
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 12:21 PM
Thanks.
Daniels Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 10:07 PM
Beautiful- can feel the Love, Maclawrence. Congratulations. x.
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 10:15 PM
Ghairo, many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 5:22 PM
So sweet this is
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 6:02 PM
Thanks Andrea.
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