Hiku: spring begins its reign

it's no longer  l~~o~~n~~g~
               the patient  w—a—i—t  for your  s*m*i*l*e  
                    
                          spring warmth  f
                                                        i
                                                          l
                                                           l
                                                             s   the  ~a~~i~~r~

                    the  r•a•i•n•s  start  to
                                                 d
                                                 r
                                                 o
                                                 p~

               after   h—o—u—r—s   of
                              o~v~e~r~c~a~s~t

                      spring   b
                                         e
                                              gins  its  r*e*i*g*n










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Contest Judged:  June 9th, 2025 10:20:00 PM
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Placement: First
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Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 11:02 PM
Very nice. Congrats
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June 10, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Thanks for always chipping in encouraging remarks.
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