Hiku: nature nurtures love

when n••i••g••h••t is in s°i°g°h°t
d•a•r•k•n•e•s•s can be f
                                          r               
                                            e
                                               i
                                                  g
                                                    h
                                                       t
                                                         s 
                                                             of  
                                                           f~r~i~g~h~t~
         sought from  l—o—v—e—l—e—s—s   
                                                 t~h~o~u~g~h~t~s

nature n
              u. 
                r
                  t
                   u
                     r                                      
                      e
                       s  l~o~v~e
when s*t*a*r*s  s*h*i*n*e  like  
                                             g*e*m*s  in  
                                                            s–p–a–c–e~
p—l—a—c—e  for  
                               f°l°o°w°e°r  
                                                    v.a.s.e





Contest title: YOUR CHOICE z
Contest Judged:  June 21st, 2025 9:27:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Placement: First
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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Very interesting. Stars and flowers at the end was very nice
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Thanks. I would have gone to bed sad not reading your comment on it.
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