Hiku: heartbroken

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Contest: YOUR CHOICE u
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Date: June 2nd, 2025
Contest Judged: June 6th, 2025 9:03:00 AM
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Excellent! Well deserved, I love it Maclawrence. X.
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 3:09 AM
Loads of thanks. I really appreciate your comment.
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