Hiku: Fresh love
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p blue sea f r e s h n e s s
like the c o o l n e s s our love b
r
i
n
g
s~
two adults in love
l e f t to r i g h t,
we ~ d ~ r ~ i ~ f ~ t ~ ~
though the ~s~e~a~~ w~a~v~e~s~ rise and
roll~
our love, remains fresh
Contest: YOUR CHOICE o
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Contest Judged:May 26th, 2025 9:49:00 PM
Placement: First
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