hiku - coral

moonlight drapes over 
 coral coloured grains of sand
resting peacefully
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Thank you very much.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Sweet! Congrats!
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 10:57 PM
I love the vibe. Congrats
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much.
Thomas Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Your use of enjambment here adds a lot of depth and makes for a such smooth read. Really nicely done.
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Thank you very much.
Jama Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Thank you very much.
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