Hiku: a gift of nature

my f
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                  d  g~l~e~a~m~s like  g o l d
sunflowers t
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                              t  t—o—w—a—r—d  l i g h t
drinking summer's s*h*i*n*e


from d
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                      n  until  d
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                                                 k
my kitty watched this  b  e  a  u  t  y~
                                           as gift of nature







Contest title: 1393
Contest Judged: July 1st, 2025  9:06:00 PM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Placement: First
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 2:41 PM
Sweet and pretty
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Thanks.
mysore Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 6:26 AM
cool!
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June 29, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Thanks.
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