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Hiku 8

a rainy day soggy squirrel scampers ~ puddle splash

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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/27/2023 11:35:00 AM
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This past winter we had a whole lot of those "soggy squirrels!" Wonderful imagery, alliteration and onomatopoeia (now there's a mouthful!) all skillfully compacted into your seventeen syllables that creates a delightful rainy day slice of life! Congrats and high fives Jo! Blessings!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2023 11:15:00 AM
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A creative/fun write. We could use some rain. Send it this way. Have a great day/week............
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Sotto Poet
Date: 6/24/2023 11:00:00 AM
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Joanna, you crafted a great haiku, you convey a perfect view of a soggy squirrel.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/24/2023 9:57:00 AM
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Joanna, your hiku is perfect. Well written.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2023 9:48:00 AM
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...is he chasing Basho's frog????
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