Hiku 8


        a rainy day
 soggy squirrel scampers ~
                 puddle splash

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Sam Kauffman

June 27, 2023 at 11:35 AM

This past winter we had a whole lot of those "soggy squirrels!" Wonderful imagery, alliteration and onomatopoeia (now there's a mouthful!) all skillfully compacted into your seventeen syllables that creates a delightful rainy day slice of life! Congrats and high fives Jo! Blessings!