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hiku 6 liner -EXPLAINED

         momentarily

wait  hesitate and dream-

        imagination cries

          
unshackled 

      conception awakens-

         formulates

 

hiku=haiku-in-english 

Doubled= 2 separate stand-alone untitled hiku - capable of unifying into a six-liner
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Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Did you sketch your own picture?
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 10:49 AM
I like this, Brian. I really like that line "imagination cries"
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