Hiku 3

white daisy blooms rain paints her face ~ teardrops glisten 23rd March 2023

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Date: 3/25/2023 5:55:00 PM

Congrats my friend!

Date: 3/25/2023 4:17:00 PM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Jo

Date: 3/25/2023 9:59:00 AM

Brilliant! Just amazing, Jo. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Date: 3/25/2023 8:19:00 AM

Top imagery Joanna. Cheers - Gary

Date: 3/25/2023 7:26:00 AM

What a lovely poem! It's amazing how much emotion and depth you were able to convey in just a few words. Congratulations :)

Date: 3/25/2023 5:38:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations :)

Date: 3/23/2023 11:17:00 AM

Refreshingly lovely, Jo. :)

Date: 3/23/2023 10:40:00 AM

You paint a great picture.

Date: 3/23/2023 6:45:00 AM

This is a great one, Jo.A very clear picture! Silly me, I did not know your name was Joanna. Rhymes with Hosanna:)

Date: 3/23/2023 5:26:00 AM

Brilliant! Just Brilliant, my dearest, Jo. Thank you for the honor. Blessings!!

Date: 3/23/2023 5:05:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Jo: I can see this rain refreshed daisy. SuZ

Date: 3/23/2023 4:47:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Jo, I love the second line