Hiku 3


  white daisy blooms
           rain paints her face ~
                     teardrops glisten



23rd March 2023

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Margarita Lillico

March 25, 2023 at 5:55 PM

Congrats my friend!

Joseph May

March 25, 2023 at 4:17 PM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Jo

Sotto Poet

March 25, 2023 at 9:59 AM

Brilliant! Just amazing, Jo. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Gary Radice

March 25, 2023 at 8:19 AM

Top imagery Joanna. Cheers - Gary

Kabutha Paul Hempstone

March 25, 2023 at 7:26 AM

What a lovely poem! It's amazing how much emotion and depth you were able to convey in just a few words. Congratulations :)

Heidi Sands

March 25, 2023 at 5:38 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 23, 2023 at 11:17 AM

Refreshingly lovely, Jo. :)

Victor Buhagiar

March 23, 2023 at 10:40 AM

You paint a great picture.

Daniel Turner

March 23, 2023 at 6:45 AM

This is a great one, Jo.A very clear picture! Silly me, I did not know your name was Joanna. Rhymes with Hosanna:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 23, 2023 at 5:26 AM

Brilliant! Just Brilliant, my dearest, Jo. Thank you for the honor. Blessings!!

Suzanne Delaney

March 23, 2023 at 5:05 AM

Beautiful imagery, Jo: I can see this rain refreshed daisy. SuZ

Joseph May

March 23, 2023 at 4:47 AM

Beautiful haiku Jo, I love the second line

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