hiku 23

sculptures set in stone beach breeze blows as fresh breath ~ merry memories made
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Rodgers Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 12:09 PM
Dear Joanna, I love a great Haiku! A quick breath of summer, simple, clean, and grounded in the kind of moment you don’t realize you’re keeping until later. I like how you move from the stillness of the sculptures to the breeze and then to memory. Winter Blessings, Joanna, Daniel
May Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 3:48 PM
Very nice haiku Jo, best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Was this for the contest? I really like it.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 7:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. I sure wish I was on a warm beach. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away............
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