Hiku

s
  t 
    r 
      a
         y 
             leaves rest upon
aged train tracks of yesteryear~ 

l o
s t
       to time's harsh hand
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:34 AM
I really like this. I got a bit lost on the word lost so the design of that word was quite fitting!
Jama Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 11:33 PM
Thanks Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:33 PM
Ahhh!!! So many times, that is the way it is today. Congratulations to you on this winner. Way to go. Sara K
Jama Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 1:46 PM
Thank you kindly ,
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