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hiku

s
  t 
    r 
      a
         y 
             leaves rest upon
aged train tracks of yesteryear~ 

l o
s t
       to time's harsh hand

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Date: 7/31/2025 6:34:00 AM
I really like this. I got a bit lost on the word lost so the design of that word was quite fitting!
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Billie Jama
Date: 7/31/2025 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 7/28/2025 1:33:00 PM
Ahhh!!! So many times, that is the way it is today. Congratulations to you on this winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Billie Jama
Date: 7/30/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank you kindly ,

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