Hiku 12


grey clouds hover 
        umpteen ripples in puddles ~
                                               natural AC
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September 3, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Vivid imagery..this is an awesome haiku!
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September 1, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Indeed, Jo! So picturesque. In the summertime, the daily fogbanks are our AC! I can relate! It does get toasty on occasion when the fog doesn't come in and I always love those warm days. Congratulations and blessings!
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September 1, 2023 at 10:53 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - hugs
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August 31, 2023 at 6:42 PM
Very cool, Joanna!
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 9:10 AM
so COOL . I really like this
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:28 AM
- Many need rain... we have far too much, Jo - Great written :) - hugs
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August 30, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Oh!! Yes, cooler thank God for the cooler air. I just hope no one is hurt in this hurricane. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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