Hiku 12

grey clouds hover umpteen ripples in puddles ~ natural AC

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Silent One

Date: 9/3/2023 10:57:00 AM

Vivid imagery..this is an awesome haiku!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2023 10:58:00 AM

Indeed, Jo! So picturesque. In the summertime, the daily fogbanks are our AC! I can relate! It does get toasty on occasion when the fog doesn't come in and I always love those warm days. Congratulations and blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2023 10:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2023 6:42:00 PM

Very cool, Joanna!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2023 9:10:00 AM

so COOL . I really like this

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2023 8:28:00 AM

- Many need rain... we have far too much, Jo - Great written :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2023 5:39:00 AM

Oh!! Yes, cooler thank God for the cooler air. I just hope no one is hurt in this hurricane. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara