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Highs and Lows Premiere Contest Winner

Feeling manic, fairly groovin' Singing aloud as I'm hoovering. Brilliant ideas flood my mind, Ideas that could save mankind. I have the answers, I know them all It's all too wonderful, life's a ball. But there just behind me parked Is a place, fearful and dark. I know it's going to call on me, To stamp upon my reverie. And as my joy soars ever higher, It'll drag me down, into the mire. Entry for Mania - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lewis Raynes 23/1/2017. Placed 1st.

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Date: 11/11/2017 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest, Gary - well-done, my friend! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2017 4:12:00 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 11/7/2017 10:45:00 PM
Perfect description of plunging from high to low, Gary. Congrats on your top win! Janice
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/8/2017 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 11/7/2017 9:36:00 PM
I love the extremes this mania conveys, great poem Gary, congratulations on your first place.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/8/2017 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Lewis :)
Date: 11/6/2017 4:22:00 PM
No! Don't let it. Nice work. ..Mike No! Don't let it! Nice Work! Mike Reed
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/7/2017 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Mike :)
Date: 10/23/2017 8:59:00 AM
Succinct and apt pen! My best to you for the contest :) xomo!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)

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