High Wire Act

high ceiling eight foot ladder reaching for the fan — n sturdy a d steady 8/6/2020 *third line split for effect

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/6/2020 6:53:00 PM

Definitely over my head. lol... Think I'll stick to chutes... ~ Every Ladder TUHI

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2020 6:59:00 PM

LOL!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/6/2020 10:49:00 AM

Reallycool and so original Panagiota xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2020 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2020 5:31:00 AM

Love how you wrote this Kim, very effective. Have had a few wobbles on ladders in my time lol. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2020 6:29:00 AM

Hoping for no wobbling! Or there could be hobbling and we don’t want that! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/6/2020 5:02:00 AM

LOL! I love the effect. Brilliant ku ~x

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2020 5:14:00 AM

Thanks so much. Risky adding a fourth line as is climbing and 8 foot ladder! My husband and hopefully son-in-law! Not me!!