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High School Sweet Hearts

A boy and girl meet By being dared to dance Afraid to step on each others' feet They take an awkward stance. Seems like an insignificant meeting, After all it was only junior high However their feelings were not fleeting As years have since passed by. Classmates saw their relationship and turned green, Because they saw the couple, and wanted the same; A bond so strong it gave off a glittering sheen. Their love so fierce, so strong, only a miracle could tame. They hope one day to marry, But are still too young, So each other's burden they will carry, Until that fateful day can come. Their relationship was far ahead of its time, For it is a bond that cannot be broken. Together-always will fight through grime; This description of their love isn't whole, but only a token.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/31/2014 8:08:00 AM
wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Joe
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:50:00 PM
JOE, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:24:00 AM
Hi Joe - beautiful poem about an encompassing relationship - young love is often hard to nurture in a hostile environment. Very well written. I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:24:00 AM
that very sweet moment of high school life..young love..promises and brightful dreams...you made it perfect in your writing..Thanks for living up the memories!!! .always, AiyaH :))
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