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High Noon At Park Bench

squirrels quarrelling a large scurry going nuts shells land everywhere A STRAND (1065) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand PS 5/7/5 02/03/22

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Terry Flood

Date: 2/4/2022 7:59:00 AM

It ain’t shells you need to worry about, David. When squirrels quarrel, it’s ear muffs you need. Ah, unless you’re under the tree of course. Okay… point taken ;-). I struggle with these haiku thingies… clearly, you don’t.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2022 8:37:00 AM

You have a penchant for the epics Terry, I have on and off weeks for these haiku and monoku things, I do like squirrels though so does my dog lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/3/2022 4:58:00 AM

Lol a comical scene of a free for all. Great image David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2022 8:41:00 AM

Thanks Tom it really was, squirrels, turtle doves and a magpie where having a royal rumble, but my dog sorted it out, he almost had the squirrel for dinner, cheers David

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/2/2022 1:50:00 PM

Lol. I love this great Haiku. Shells land everywhere :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/2/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi, strangely enough that last line came first the rest followed in turn, hope you are keeping well, cheers David