High Fever

fire brigade siren shrieks in the town fire raging in my heart pray, a shower of rain. ~Contest: Kimo ~Sponsor: Constance La France.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2021 5:47:00 AM

Oh!! I wonder if this is resent or just an idea for a poem. Creative and well thought out winner. Way to go with this one. Congrats. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 9:09:00 PM

Abdul, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/7/2021 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 4:34:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2021 8:08:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win, Abdul.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2021 3:47:00 PM

its hard to put out the flames in the heat Abdul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/5/2021 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations. Such a strong expression of faith, hope. Stunning.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2021 5:07:00 AM

Feel the emotion!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/4/2021 8:11:00 PM

Hmmm...I'm not sure our fire brigade will deal with flaming hearts. Interesting.

Abdul Malik
Date: 9/4/2021 8:56:00 PM

It's the flame of the heart, man. not easy to put the fire out!