High Fever

fire brigade siren shrieks in the town
fire raging in my heart
pray, a shower of rain.



~Contest: Kimo
~Sponsor: Constance La France.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 5:47 AM
Oh!! I wonder if this is resent or just an idea for a poem. Creative and well thought out winner. Way to go with this one. Congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Abdul.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:47 PM
its hard to put out the flames in the heat Abdul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations. Such a strong expression of faith, hope. Stunning.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Feel the emotion!
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Hmmm...I'm not sure our fire brigade will deal with flaming hearts. Interesting.
Mandani Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:56 PM
It's the flame of the heart, man. not easy to put the fire out!
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