Hi-Five Hai-ku
Problems pass on by,
they are hard to hold onto...
when now never ends!
In this dark mansion,
phantoms of fear are vanquished...
by the flames of faith!
We part the Red Sea,
of flesh and blood to escape...
our evil pharaohs!
Points of light appear,
where the velvet sky wears thin...
and heaven shines through!
The light it shall come,
shining in the eastern sky...
betrothed to the sun!
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