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Hiding

HIDING Hiding behind a tree I was stunned drowned by ice Please don’t made me see Series of tears flowing in the eyes Thought of you impressed me You’re not the boy that I should dream But what’s this feeling you’ve shown to me Expecting, Assuming and eyes went dim Crumpling the letters you’ve given to me Holding so tight in tree’s trunk Cursing that girl, your heart lock’s key Want to bump her by a truck But boy , I don’t have the right I don’t know if you love me But your words in the letters told me to fight Or maybe you saw her better than me I want to break that kiss But I can’t move, still hiding behind a tree No enough brave to face Surrendering that you’ve chosen her over me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/10/2024 7:28:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:52:00 PM
Noemi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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