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Hide and Seek

The words are playing hide and seek And I’ve no clue where I should peek. My situation’s not unique But confidence is shrinking… I fear I’m on a losing streak; Without a paddle, up the creek. My brain a rowboat with a leak And I am slowly sinking… I used to have a fine technique Yet I’m in need of quite a tweak Though I’ll provide my own critique, The consequence of thinking…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/28/2017 6:01:00 AM
This poem was really fun and nice to read. Smooth cadence, the rhymes are wonderful and it all came together so nicely. I love this rhyming scheme, not sure what it is called, 3+1 is how I see I and it was great. Nicely done Ilene.
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Date: 4/27/2017 8:27:00 PM
It sounds like your muse has a great sense of humor Ilene. This made me smile. Thank you for that! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/27/2017 6:51:00 PM
hmmm your muse is having a little holiday I think but you still came up with a great rhyme Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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